Comments:

ScienceGeek - 2004-12-19 13:14:14
I have to say, I really, really see such growth in your writing since I first started noticing your postings. Grape Lucidity is very well structured, your dialog flows well and both Grissom and Sara are believably in character. There there isn't a hint of over-the-top melodrama, but the story is still gripping. If you've been conciously working at it, I wanted you to know that your hard work has been noticed.
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oomm - 2004-12-20 00:09:37
WOW, thank you so much, that's a great compliment!
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Jill - 2004-12-20 09:47:21
How many times can I tell you that I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! You are an amazing writer!! I usually read this on FanFiction, but I want to see the racier version ;) Please update soon!!
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Jill - 2004-12-20 09:47:56
How many times can I tell you that I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! You are an amazing writer!! I usually read this on FanFiction, but I want to see the racier version ;) Please update soon!!
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oomm - 2004-12-21 01:45:13
I never get tired of hearing it, THANK YOU!
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idreamedmusic - 2005-01-03 08:32:21
Oh, how did I manage to miss this version ;) I love it. I can only say again that your characterisation is spot on, and you have a beautiful writing style. Thank you for this wonderful story!
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