Comments:

Wendiloo - 2004-06-21 15:29:46
I love this story so far. Please continue it.
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Buzzy - 2004-06-21 16:55:29
Very interesting story so far. Really like the interaction between Sara and Mrs. Grissom. Very emotional and respectful. Quite a twist Grissom having an 'evil' twin. Unique concept. You've done well to keep it from becoming over the top. Very nice characterization of Sara being strong and yet knowing she needs Grissom's support. And calling him on it. Looking forward to seeing how he comes through for her.
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